Here's another six from Crossfire of Love...
"Why can’t you just leave me alone?" Gabriella asked.
"Because I don’t believe you want me to leave you alone. Let me take you to dinner, and we can discuss what’s going on between us."
"I’m meeting my friend tonight."
"Cancel." He’d wanted to kiss her for months. "Stay with me tonight."
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Love their interaction! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Zee. I had great fun writing these two;)
DeleteVery crisp, provocative dialogue. I'm very interested. Great Six!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gem. Glad I've piqued your interest. I'm a dialogue girl. I obsess over getting it just right, so I'm thrilled you liked it.
DeleteOh, i like the way he talks... bossy, sexiness!
ReplyDeleteYes, Kerrianne, Lorenzo is very sexy. But he's met his match in Gabriella;)
DeleteA strong man who has met his match, yum. The exchange is intriguing and gives me just a feel for them both in this moment, love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, S.J. He has met his match!
DeleteOh, I like him. Yum!
ReplyDeleteThanks for checking out my six!
DeleteHe's so to the point, why do I have a feeling that may not work so well with this heroine? Great six!
ReplyDeleteHe has his work cut out for him:) Thanks!
DeleteLovely six Ella. Can't wait to read this one - he sounds like my kind of alpha ;o)
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