Sunday, April 22, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday... Crossfire of Love by Ella Jade


Here's another six from Crossfire of Love...


"Why can’t you just leave me alone?" Gabriella asked.
"Because I don’t believe you want me to leave you alone. Let me take you to dinner, and we can discuss what’s going on between us."
"I’m meeting my friend tonight."
"Cancel."  He’d wanted to kiss her for months. "Stay with me tonight."

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13 comments:

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    1. Thanks, Zee. I had great fun writing these two;)

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  2. Very crisp, provocative dialogue. I'm very interested. Great Six!

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    1. Thanks, Gem. Glad I've piqued your interest. I'm a dialogue girl. I obsess over getting it just right, so I'm thrilled you liked it.

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  3. Oh, i like the way he talks... bossy, sexiness!

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    1. Yes, Kerrianne, Lorenzo is very sexy. But he's met his match in Gabriella;)

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  4. A strong man who has met his match, yum. The exchange is intriguing and gives me just a feel for them both in this moment, love it!

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  5. He's so to the point, why do I have a feeling that may not work so well with this heroine? Great six!

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    1. He has his work cut out for him:) Thanks!

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  6. Lovely six Ella. Can't wait to read this one - he sounds like my kind of alpha ;o)

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