Sunday, March 25, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday - Ella Jade Crossfire of Love

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. This week I'm offering up a few words from my newest release.


Chapter One


Gabby gave him a small smile as she sat mesmerized by his face.


That morning in the kitchen she experienced her first crush. Lorenzo Martinez was the cutest boy she’d ever laid eyes on. She’d spend many years scribbling his name in her notebook after that day. Her favorite thing to write was Mrs. Lorenzo Martinez.

Sometimes a girl should be careful what she wished for.




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8 comments:

  1. Why must she be careful? What's his deal
    interesting 6 for sure!!

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, S.J. I'm thrilled I piqued your interest.

      Ella

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  2. But if what you're wishing for is a really good thing...LOL! I liked the snippet a LOT!

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    1. lol...Veronica. In this case it is something good. Gabby just doesn't know it yet;) Thanks for checking out my 6.

      Ella

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  3. LOL. I remember scribbling things like that in my notebooks. :)

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    1. I know, lol I thought about high school when I wrote that line. Thanks for stopping by.

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  4. Ooh, that last line is certainly intriguing!

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